I have decided to change the structure of my thriller as i feel that it would have been to complicated and may have taken to long and gone over the 5 minutes that we have been assigned.
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My idea is that it will begin with her being assigned john's case by her boss in a moving car, which will be a mid shot showing the moving background. This will have the title of 3 months earlier, illustrating that it is not the present day. As she's being told about the guy, there will be different shots of the case folder, showing his picture and other photographs of him in everyday settings. She is told that the man must die as he has seen something at the research lab that is top secret and that the company cannot risk getting out.
The next scene will be as she's walking up a busy pathway carrying papers, she is dressed in high heels and a suit and looks incredibly beautiful. She shoves slightly into a man, as this happens her folders fly up in the air and fall to the floor. She bends down to collect them all and the man does the same. She says thank you in a hurried voice and looks up slowly to meet his eyes and you realise that its JACK the man who she has been assigned to kill. This illustrates that she has begun her case and now has to gain his trust. He smiles and she walks away from him her face changes to being serious and cold again. He picks up a card that's been left on the floor deliberately by her and when he realises its her number he puts it in his pocket and walks away smiling.
The next section of the film is a V.O of SOPHIA as she talks about how the job and how it was getting harder as she is actually having real feelings for this man. You see scenes of them doing different things such as walking in the park, having dinner etc and you can tell that they are falling in love.
It ends with a scene as they are hugging and he kisses her, she smiles but then slowly begins to cry softly. when he asks her whats wrong she says I'm not who you think i am. She asks about what he saw at the research lab and then tells him about her job as an assassin. He walks out slowly and shocked shutting the door behind him SOPHIA is left alone looking down when the door opens again. JACK is standing at the door and asks if she does actually love him? When her reply is yes they kiss and hold each other. She then says 'we'll run tomorrow, we'll go somewhere they won't find us'
The final scene is as they lie in bed together when SOPHIA is awoken by a noise downstairs. JACK remains asleep, so she takes a gun downstairs with her. She knows that someone is in the house, they are here to kill as she has failed her case. A masked man comes out of the shadows with a gun and they fight, this will be filled with action and suspense. She will suddenly get free from his grasp and turns around and shot's him, she suddenly hears something behind her so turns quickly and shots. But its JACK. He falls to the floor and she runs over cradling him until he takes him last breath.
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